Lady Sydney

Meanwhile , Jason was at home touching up some pictures for Fonda’s story. It didn’t take long for him to hear the urgent cry on Down and South. The sound ...

Hey there! I'm very lazy, so I think I'm just going to go ahead and critique your story as I read it, rather than when I've finished it. :wink: So, ...

Wow. :shock: I can't believe I actually did this right! Thank you so much to all of you who have critiqued/reviewed. Much appreciated. As said before, I may write another ...

Considering how irritated she was with me earlier, it’s a bit surprising to have Genevieve come over and embrace me in a tight hug after the show, “You were wonderful, ...

Very nice, very nice. I tried going back through this to see if I could find any errors, but I couldn't spot them, so I'll leave that to Squallz or ...

That was... amazing. :shock: But, then again, I would expect no less from you. And I can honestly say that your stories are probably the first stories on here that ...

Thank you so much, you guys! Your criticisms are much appreciated. ^_^ Joeducktape: I didn't even know that I switched tenses until you pointed it out. I've read this three ...

Hey there, Time (If I may call you that)! :D I enjoyed this little piece of yours, but you understand that even great work can be improved. :wink: So, here ...

Thanks so much for your opinions, guys! Now that I look back, my first two lines do seem pretty cliche. :? But, anyway, it was fun coming up with that ...

I will tell you right now that I am NOT a poet. I know very little about the art of poetry, but I thought that I would give it a ...

A short little beginning to something that I hope will grow into something bigger. Read, review, enjoy! --- I knew he was out there somewhere, waiting in the audience to ...

Hey there, Rubric. ^^ This is quite a read, I must say. It's impressive, but as said before, it's just a little bit too wordy. The reader won't mind the ...

- The chance to babysit FIFTEEN kids, all thirteen years old and younger, by myself. (Oh yippee-ki-yay :roll: ) - Pirates of the Caribbean 3!!! *loves Captain Jack to no ...

Ok, I've re-written it now! Please tell me what you think of it.

Lol That's what I said to tell me at the very beginning. If everything is too crammed to seem realistic, I will be more than happy to expand what's going ...